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A notary, or a neighbour who knows the trade
You hear your tone of voice in every email, quote and post your business sends, whether you wrote it down or not. Two firms can say the same thing; one sounds like a notary, the other like a neighbour who knows the trade. Buyers feel that difference before they can name it.
If you want to be precise, separate voice from tone. Your voice is who you are and does not change. Your tone adapts to the moment. Mailchimp puts it this way in its own style guide: you have the same voice all the time, but your tone changes with the situation and the reader's state of mind. A post about a new colleague can sound lighter than an email about a late invoice.
Four sliders: formal, serious, respectful, matter-of-fact
The most practical model comes from Nielsen Norman Group, the American user experience research firm. In July 2016 researcher Kate Moran described four dimensions, each a slider between two poles: formal or casual, serious or funny, respectful or irreverent, matter-of-fact or enthusiastic. A tone is a setting of those four sliders, not a vague word like "professional".
In a follow-up study in August 2016 they showed 100 American adults near-identical copy with only the tone changed. Casual, conversational and moderately enthusiastic copy did best overall. The playful, irreverent copy for a car insurer did worst: friendlier, but less trustworthy, and it did not make people more likely to recommend the firm. Trustworthiness explained about half of whether someone would recommend a company; friendliness added far less.
Voice stays, tone moves
Two words that often blur into one.
- Changes
- VoiceNever, it is who you are
- TonePer moment, channel and reader
- Written down as
- VoiceThree or four core words with what they mean
- ToneExamples per situation: quote, complaint, post
- Example
- VoiceClear, calm, human
- ToneLight on Instagram, plain in a payment reminder
- Owned by
- VoiceThe founder
- ToneEveryone who writes, with the guide at hand
Fix your voice first. A tone without a voice goes in every direction.
One line on four sliders
An accounting firm closes for the holidays: one message, three tones
Formal
“Please be advised that our office will be closed from 24 December up to and including 3 January.”
FormalCasual
SeriousFunny
RespectfulIrreverent
Matter-of-factEnthusiastic
Fits a letter about a tax assessment or an overdue invoice.
Warm and clear
“We are closed from 24 December to 3 January. On Monday 4 January we are back for you.”
FormalCasual
SeriousFunny
RespectfulIrreverent
Matter-of-factEnthusiastic
Fits most small businesses, on the site and in the newsletter.
Playful
“Holiday mode! The calculators rest from 24 December to 3 January. On 4 January we start counting again.”
FormalCasual
SeriousFunny
RespectfulIrreverent
Matter-of-factEnthusiastic
Fits Instagram, rarely an email about money.
The content is the same three times. The tone decides whether a client trusts you with their books.
One voice, several languages
Selling in more than one language multiplies the decisions. Dutch, French and German all make you choose between a formal and an informal you: u or je, vous or tu, Sie or du. In Flanders, the Flemish government's language advice service gives a clear rule: use u at first contact, in formal messages and when the relationship is under strain, such as a complaint or a payment request; switch to je once you know your audience. Never mix the two in one text.
The same brand can land on different settings per market. A casual English site may need a slightly more formal French version for buyers who expect vous from a supplier. Write the tone guide once, then add a short section per language with the form of address, ten banned words and two example texts. That is how we approach multilingual websites.
| Situation | Setting on the four sliders | Form of address in Dutch |
|---|---|---|
| Homepage and social media | Casual, serious, respectful, a little enthusiastic | je |
| Quote or proposal | Halfway formal, serious, respectful, matter-of-fact | je or u, as the client prefers |
| Payment reminder | Formal, serious, respectful, matter-of-fact | u |
| Reply to a bad review | Casual, serious, respectful, matter-of-fact | the form the reviewer used |
| Job ad | Casual, can be funny, respectful, enthusiastic | je |
Twelve people, one voice: an accounting firm
Take an accounting firm in Rotterdam with twelve staff, where every employee writes differently. In one afternoon they agree on three core words (clear, calm, human), a slider setting, je on the site and u in reminders, and ten words they drop. They add five examples, good and bad: a welcome email, a reminder, a post, a quote and an answer to a bad review. The two-page guide goes into the website brief and the social media plan.
A word of caution from the NN/g study: humour makes you likeable until the topic is money, health or your own mistake. Keep the jokes for Instagram and write invoices, reminders and apologies calmly.
A day of work, and less rewriting
A two-page guide takes one or two days of work, in-house or with an agency. The bigger job comes after: rewriting your homepage, your service pages and the emails that go out automatically. If you outsource your posts, tone is part of the management fee; see social media management pricing. The return: clients recognise you without a logo, new staff write in the right style sooner, and AI tools that draft copy get a clear example. Your USP only sounds credible in a tone that fits, and a story loses its pull if it reads like a press release.
Tone, form of address and style
What is an example of tone of voice?
The same message in different tones. Formal: "Please be advised that our office will be closed." Warm: "We are closed from 24 December to 3 January." Playful: "The calculators are taking a break." The information stays, the impression changes.
What is the difference between brand voice and tone of voice?
Brand voice is the constant personality behind all your copy. Tone is how that voice adapts to a situation: lighter in a post, plainer in a reminder. Many people use tone of voice for both.
What are the four dimensions of tone of voice?
Formal or casual, serious or funny, respectful or irreverent, matter-of-fact or enthusiastic. Nielsen Norman Group described them in 2016. Every tone is a position on those four sliders.
Should my tone differ per country?
Your voice should not, your tone may. Buyers in some markets expect a more formal address from a supplier. Keep the core words the same and adjust the form of address and the examples per language.
